Talk:How to rebuild an engine
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I've already started editing the article for clarity and additional content but here are my general comments: | I've already started editing the article for clarity and additional content but here are my general comments: | ||
#The article needs to be trimmed down. | #The article needs to be trimmed down. | ||
| − | #Use of "I" in an informative article such as a wiki should never be used unless it is in quoted material, and "you" should be used sparingly. | + | #Use of "I" in an informative article such as a wiki should never be used unless it is in quoted material, and "you" should be used sparingly. Article should also be gender neutral. (Not all of us are "fellows.") |
#Though there is a need and desire for original material, in order to have a quality article/site, sources other than community authors should be cited to support statements whenever possible. | #Though there is a need and desire for original material, in order to have a quality article/site, sources other than community authors should be cited to support statements whenever possible. | ||
#As recommended by another user, there should be information provided regarding common practices of assembly/disassembly with references to procedures specific to particular engines/builds. A link to a list of links to available procedures would be very useful. | #As recommended by another user, there should be information provided regarding common practices of assembly/disassembly with references to procedures specific to particular engines/builds. A link to a list of links to available procedures would be very useful. | ||
#Where content is noticeably lacking or awaiting additional content contribution, I have begun to indicate it as <<subject name / content desired>>. | #Where content is noticeably lacking or awaiting additional content contribution, I have begun to indicate it as <<subject name / content desired>>. | ||
[[User:Jamminredheadchixor|Jamminredheadchixor]] 15:35, 3 September 2008 (PDT) | [[User:Jamminredheadchixor|Jamminredheadchixor]] 15:35, 3 September 2008 (PDT) | ||
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